My idea for my scene
First scene
Panel 1:
Now there were two different armies of rivalling camps on mountains. The Philistines stood on one mountain and Israel stood on another mountain on the other side facing their enemy. There was a great valley between them.
This panel should be a long shot seeing both armies on the mountains facing each other with a valley in the middle.
Panel 2:
From the Philistines emerged a champion who went forth in front of his army and declared out loud “ Why have you come out to line up for battle?
In this panel we have a medium shot of Goliath pointing and saying these words, also within this panel showing his army behind him as he's pointing.
Panel 3
Goliath says:
“Am I not a Philistine, and you the servants of Saul? Choose a man for yourselves, and let him come down to me. If he is able to fight with me and kill me, then we will be your servants.”
In this panel, a profile shot, showing Goliath smiling and looking evil while saying this.
Panel 4:
But if I prevail against him and kill him, then you shall be our servants and serve us.
In this panel a close up of Goliath's lips indicating that he's saying this.
Panel 5:
“Goliath continued saying, “I defy the armies of Israel this day; give me a man that we may fight together.
In this panel is a medium close up of Goliath in a welcoming pose as if to say he wants this fight to happen in a evil stance.
Panel 6:
When Saul and all of Israel had heard this they were greatly afraid.
In this panel, is a medium close up of saul and his army looking afraid.
Next scene
Panel 7:
In this panel, a close up of Jesse, the father of david's face looking worried.
Panel 8:
In this panel, a medium shot of david feeding his father's sheep
Panel 9:
In this panel, a worms eye view of Jesse looking down on david while david is feeding his father sheep while he's father says: Take these for your brothers in the army of Israel and to the captains of their thousands and see how your brothers are doing and bring back news of them.
Panel 10:
A close up of Jesse's hands having dried grain with Ten loaves and ten cheeses.
This was obviously from the bible
Wednesday, 23 March 2011
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